Tuesday, November 11, 2008

The Woman Below Comments

Rating: 5.0

The curtains pull in her scent as it lures me from my bed,
perched in my windowsill
curiosity embraces me on the edge...
What's her name?
...
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Hershe Moore
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 11 November 2008

Your poem 'the woman below' is a very descriptive piece.You have shown your poetic prowess in doing so.Lovely piece Hershe. I love it.

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Stacey Watts 11 November 2008

Wow very compelling story. I like the way you brilliantly weaved this tale.

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