Friday, September 11, 2020

The Wolves Within Comments

Rating: 4.7

We sit alone prepared to feast
no thought to who partakes,
ignoring battles fought within
creating more heartaches
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Lodigiana Poetess
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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 October 2021

To my Favourites. The graphic you added is sterling!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 October 2021

An ardent poem, dear Lodigiana, your fascinating poem I have enjoyed very much. CONGRATULATIONS for this impressive and profound poem. Most deserved The Member Poem Of The Day! 5 Stars full on Top. You deserved it.

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Chinedu Dike 04 October 2021

An insightful rendition powerfully penned with conviction....

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 October 2021

Dear Poetess, a fantastic poem that deserves top stars

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 October 2021

Lodigiana Poetess has penned this poem with a deep insight into the psyche of human mind.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 October 2021

The two wolves that reside in our being that are absolutely in contradiction to each other. The Yin and Yang aspects of nature.

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Khairul Ahsan 03 October 2020

An inherent dichotomy expressed beautifully and metaphorically by the two wolves. 'Both hungry beasts await your will. Decide which wolf you need. For you alone dictates who dies The one you chose… you feed' - loved the metaphor. Heartiest congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 October 2020

In the cage of mind we foster two wolves- good and bad sometimes the goodness of mind becomes saint and sometimes the bad one becomes deviI the saintly wolf always does heroic deeds on this earth where struggle, war, sympathy, compassionate, humanity, philanthropy are existed the deviIish wolf always does satanic deeds on this earth where struggle, war, bIood, greed, embezzlement, extortion, hate, discrimination are existed

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 October 2020

The other wolf is joy and faith, compassion, love and peace Benevolence and empathy, goodwill that will not cease .....it's an insightful tale; excellent theme of choice in challenging life; this poem also beautiful to read; congrats for being selected this beautiful poem as POD.....deserves 5*****

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Deluke Muwanigwa 03 October 2020

Simply spendid. A poet poeting well like a wolf in sheeps clothing killing us softly with her verses.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 October 2020

A beautifully crafted poem imbued with wisdom and a meaningful message. Congratulations!

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Shaun Cronick 03 October 2020

Salutations of the loudest order to you Lodigiana! Howled from the high mountaintop and from within the deep forest below. You more than thoroughly deserve this Member Poem Of The Day accolade. For writing sheer poetry class time after timeless time. Kudos to you! And thank you Lodigiana. Take care and keep writing and I'll keep reading. Shaun.x.

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 October 2020

Both hungry beasts! ! ! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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L Milton Hankins 03 October 2020

This is a wonderful, fulfilling piece of writing.

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Savita Tyagi 03 October 2020

Loved this beautiful poem. These wolfs are to remain with us for time eternal, with our choice as to who we nourish and who is to starve. Congratulations on a wonderful member poem.

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Anil Kumar Panda 03 October 2020

Wonderful poetry about two conflicting feelings in mind. Enjoyed thoroughly. Thanks for sharing.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 03 October 2020

Lovely! As Shaun said, this reminds one of having the little devil on one shoulder and the little angel on the other, both trying to sway the person with their conflicting advice! This poem is truly worthy of being poem of the day!

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Tom Allport 03 October 2020

A wonderful write with a serious message? The choice is ours or is it already written in the stars? ......penned well.

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Harley White 03 October 2020

Thought provoking, well done, well written, all timely and true... unless there's more... a deeper dimension than duality...

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Tom Allport 03 October 2020

A wonderful write of the choices and decisions we take which ultimately decides the wolf we make? ....well penned.

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Lodigiana Poetess 03 October 2020

Thank you so much Tom..so pleased you enjoyed it Lodigiana x

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