Tuesday, August 27, 2013

The Wolf At The Door Comments

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“I will build my house with sticks, ”
“I will build my house with straw, ”
“I will build my house with bricks, ”
“And I will come and huff and puff by law,
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Elena Plotkin
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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 03 September 2013

i like the comparison that you are doing here its melt perfectly to the story that you try to tell simple words but represent bigger meaning that hidden in it an interesting and true poem

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Bri Edwards 30 August 2013

foreclosure/disclosure....very nice rhyme though, at the same time, very unfortunate situation. thanks for sharing. bri :) i like the tie in with 3 pigs.

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