I did not close my eyes at all that night
The turmoil in my mind was a terrible fright
I knew what had happened was just not right
Burned in my memory was that frightful sight
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Poetry cannot be written without imagination. But in this poem, you have walked great distances on imagination. Rhyming is also good. Overall, a good poem.
Darlene... First thing by you I have read And I have this feeling of dread You are so young (21) and I am so old (85) You'll be weaving tales after I'm cold. Don't wanna miss'em, and, so, somehow, .......... tell 'em all now! ! Your imagination's stretch is anything but normal, young lady. I shall try to hang on long enough to become a rab id fan. I do not state things lightly (ordinarily) . I believe you have an extraordinary talent for writing. I will be after you to write limericks (if you have not already done so) . I find my abilities are best used in this form (although I am also an unpublished caricaturist and cartoonist) . I am new to this site but feel I have finally found a home. I shall shush for now. a 10 rating, of course. ta Wes (Old Dad)
Loved the comment of the 'Old Dad', @Wes Vogler. I hope, he is still alive and enjoying poetry of this site.