The Withered Gardens Comments

Great and fantastic poetry shared......well done! ! !

I liked it very much. great work.

A great poem! ! .....well done...10++

Great lines! well expressed,9/10. keep it up :)

Great work, as a true citizen of the world I really identify with your thoughts, well penned, you got my vote and rating, best 10+.hope you have a chance to read my lately posted works, 'A LOVE'S GAME', 'A QUEEN WAS BORN', and 'WHEN LOVE IS GONE', Love and Peace, Romeo

fine poem good write

you are the best egyptian here in poemhunter! ! ! this poem shows that....jus t keep writing to keep your self at the top..

this world was ended since yesterday while we were wishing to find a way through war, through peace this world has its cruel lullabies..............the world has its cruel lullabies andhas ended yesterday........it is so much noble hinking fo rwishing or to find a ways...lovely presenttion....10

'the blank sheets are hungry / so let the ink get the summary / what happened last night / not forgotten just still unknown' interesting use of words.

a very nice poem :) thanks.