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The Witch I Fear Wore No Under-Weer! Comments

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There was an ole witch
Who had a troublin' twitch
That made her snarl an' bitch
Whenever she had an itch
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Jim McGill
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Kim Barney 15 November 2023

A bewitching poem...

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Bri Edwards 15 November 2023

Jim, I WONDERED how you might use 'under-weer'. bri : ) That's a spelling of underwear. : )))

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Bri Edwards 15 November 2023

stanza 4: i know WHAT I've heard used for as a noun. Could you mean THAT! ? ? [ in Urban Dictionary[ ;) I guess female witches may have them.

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Bri Edwards 15 November 2023

AMAZE (AS A NOUN) ? ? ? 'And most suddenly to my amaze She set her frickin' broom ablaze' I suggest: 'And suddenly she did, me, amaze by setting her frickin' broom ablaze.' : )

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Bri Edwards 15 November 2023

stanza 2: I say 'crank', as a verb, is misused here. What say YOU? ? ? : )

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