The Wish For A Sleepless Night Comments

‘I wish for a candle undemanding as it melts’ ~ Wow! Great philosophy in it…no getting only giving…. Thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

Sensitive and full of surprises. Keep writing!

wish for a candle undemanding as it melts i wish a dark night it makes me sleep.. every subsance has got its own merits/demerits. it suggests one is meant for each other and love is to die for others.. you can hide but despite that you wish so many things..i wish all drams could come true....beautiful write....10 read mineall dreams cometrue.. what do i seek..

Hmmm sleepless Good write drink milk and you will feel sleepy nice write

A poem amazing in its simplicity and serenity.

I wish I will never wake up when I sleep.. it gives such peace.. this is lovely write.. very nice to read...10 with lovess shan

yeah god will definitely grant those harmless wishes........a good write......

And I hope all your poetical wishes come true. You have wished for simple things that will help you heal and sleep. Beautiful words and tenderly written. 10 love Karin

such lovely words llady 10

Some situation can mask the other, and as such we can dress our wounds and bruises, .......one pain which we accept can overcome the other, we are hard to accept. We a are able to keep our anxieties and sufferings forgotten by becoming indulgent in our daily routines, and having a miraculous self recognition, .... a wonderful write NAIZ XENIA

This is a beautiful and tenderly expressed poem, Lady Grace, and your words in it are deeply touching. Carl.

All the wishes of Lady Grace are legitimate ones to be granted with God's grace.

sure.rightful demand.naizz poem.enjoyed reading it. a 10+++ from me surya

A candle undemanding as it melts.....thunder hiding crowds.....rain washing away sorrows...u have used very nice imagery thru simple words...I like the poem...

Naizz my friend this is a wonderful piece..it has a sense of healing to it...it a very well penned poem...keep up the great work