Monday, April 23, 2007

The Wish Comments

Rating: 5.0

The autumn wind blew noisily
Over the big, strong tree
The dancing leaf let go its hold
It wanted to see the sea
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Sarda Mohan
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Sandra Fowler 24 April 2007

Something very bittersweet about this autumn story. You have a way with words. Warm regards, Sandra

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Rajaram Ramachandran 24 April 2007

A jolly ride for an ant from the tree to the sea. A good story peom for children.

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