Friday, July 18, 2008

The Wise Man And The Village Boor Comments

Rating: 5.0

A visitor, wise and mellow
Visited a village below
Where among the fields of grain
Stood a grove of sugarcane
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Anita Atina
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James B. Earley 27 July 2008

And.......the wise man.....is............? Excellent composition.

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Junior Pocoloco 26 July 2008

Your a true story teller Anita. You bring the deep to us in a nice way, you give us a village to walk into, a boor to learn from and a field to walk onto and taste something sweet. Well done. Raymond

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David Champion 18 July 2008

Wonderful allegory! As always, Anita, your poems are both beautiful and filled with wisdom.

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