Saturday, November 28, 2009

The Wise Man Comments

Rating: 5.0

there was three men who met GOD.
and GOD said:
i will grant you the one thing
that you want most in the world.
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 22 December 2009

a poem that imparts immense knowledge...your narration is excellent..thanks for this lovely poem...goes into my favs.....10

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Christine Kerr 20 December 2009

Two words...Free Will They say and can do so much. You explained it so well. Funny how it all fits together. It's amazing how a man with such few words can say so much. That in it's self says a lot. Thanks for sharing

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Kranthi Pothineni 09 December 2009

Aww...enjoyed the story a lot. Very meaningful composition and your narration part speaks on its own. Very glad to read it.

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I too want free will.. but most.. i want to be his.. that is what i want. :) .

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Carol Gall 28 November 2009

lovely louis a lesson well learned 10

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