The Wisdom Of Old Age Comments

The writer confuses 'your' with 'you're' (verse 3, line 1) . Where are the commas to indicate appropriate pauses in recital?

Very nice advice of wisdom achiever, well i nod triple..yes yes and yes, we afraid what happen in future is it bad or good? i love when u say no leaflet tell it...so u earn 1st yes,2nd yes when u said as we get old we get more wiser, hmm i can see that coz more experience, knowledge, emotional control make life seen better...i understand as the little mind here, i need to gain more trick by new experience, more knowledge to gain and youngsters always need to learn emotion..Third nod for conclusion, it was great to summarize, i think we just learn how to live well than i was 6, and older will think the same and feel better than my age now..it's depend on how much we learn though...rite Chris? _Unwritten Soul