Brimming with sorrows
In a mawkish way
I loitered through the narrow
path to exhume my day.
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..as every one else here..i would also say that this was a gem of poetry..just keep writing like this Neethe..your writings will be the wiper of your sorrows... ..your poem acted as the wiper of my sorrows too.. ..keep writing beautifully..
My nickname is Rain....so rain was always special to me...Everything important in my life has it's connection with the beautiful phenomenon....even my first poem...your poem has become close to my heart because it succeeded in capturing the essence of this amazing gift of God...and the rhymes are nice...do write more...regards... :)
Amazing talent...it is unbelievable that u can write with such deep intensity of feelings at an early stage... At least we can see the future of our country if such talents emerge, blooms to be global.......
Wow... u r amazing...... a gem whose brilliance wil be seen soon
Little dreams of revile, Reached an abondoned zone. A tree stood in its middle. Something urged me to go on and I did go in a toddle.
Neetha, such a beautiful poem! I enjoyed reading it- very moving- take care- Claudia