Wednesday, August 19, 2015

The Winter Sun Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don’t leave me alone,
Come on, come on, I need your heating,
In the hot summers
You come too early not pleasant at all,
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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 August 2015

Marvellous depiction with excellent phraseology. Amusing one......10

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Kelly Kurt 19 August 2015

Another delightful poem. Anthropomorphizing the sun and lamenting seasonal variances

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Bisma Mirza 19 August 2015

Beautiful poem really!!! Bravo ..... 10 on 10

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Rajnish Manga 19 August 2015

The winter morning sun is perfectly warm and soothing. The poem presents the atmosphere meticulously when the office goers are waiting for the fog to lift by a bright sunlight. The way in which the poet has questioned the intentions of the sun is amazing: The fog is dense, visibility is low, Why you are lazy like a man too old,

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Khalida Bano Ali 19 August 2015

A nice description...............................10

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