Thursday, March 27, 2008

The Winter’s In Full Bloom Comments

Rating: 4.5

The winter’s still
In full bloom,
And I’m turned
Into a tiny thing,
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Tsira Gogeshvili
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Broken Peaces 27 March 2008

Not seen but captivated by your audience thankyou for sharing Chris x

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R H 27 March 2008

'Grief -coloured stone' - this line captures the grey, emptiness of winter, whilst the narrator is happy to be enveloped by its full bloom - content to just be...the stark imagery resounds. justine.

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