Wednesday, September 23, 2020

The Winter Coat Comments

Rating: 5.0

Here, both wind and cold rain came without a surprise
Yet, the long, weird Summer ended only yesterday
Quite a boring story but it is time for my evening walk
No dog on a lead for me but my ever wandering mind
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Marilyn Jean
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L MILTON HANKINS 23 September 2020

Marilyn, this is a well-written piece of blank verse. I love the imagery and the subject. Who has never experienced finding an old piece of paper (or whatever!) in last year's winter coat. Kudos!

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