The Winner Comments

Yes this is a fact and it's well wriiten

Too much love will kill you Just as sure as none at all It'll drain the power that's in you Make you plead and scream and crawl And the pain will make you crazy You're the victim of your crime How do you write these lines poet! ? ! Perhaps it is actually the post-modern thought-wave we are bearing through the time we pass. Beautiful but not the Bible. Love always expands itself by unconditional surrendering to a belief or a person or an ideology. So pains are the throne to a lover. What your God teaches you! When one expect return from ones loving job, perhaps that is passion which you wants to illustrate. Love always should be to its highest reach, otherwise no one can attain its nectar. Yet your poem stands great for its craft and radical thoughts you express with aesthetical poetic blend. Thank you poet for such a creation which knocks our inner chamber to stand before the mirror of soul. WRITE MORE.......MORE........... Regards, 10++ pranab

A poem from deep within the heart. Lovely write from start to finish. Love; D Break the spirit of poverty!