I will never get the opportunity
To have your proximity.
So my mind wrapped in agony and pain
Tries to find happiness and peace in vain.
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A poem expressing your dejection and sorrow over lost love....! Powerful and passionate!
Thank you so much dear poetess Ging Taping for your kind words on my poem.
You are drown in the shadow of love. It is hard to accept sometimes but you can only move on when you forgive and forget..It's not the end of the world try to look at the brighter side of life. Be happy i know its not that easy but in time you when you look back you will just smile...
The bird of my mind Will no longer fly even for a single time As it has lost the strength to soar In the sky of your amour.... Beautiful metaphor you have painted nicely dear Dipankar, many thanks, keep writing....10
Thank you so much dear poetess for your kind comments.
An exquisite poem of longing and yearning for love, imagery of a bird not able to extend it's wings is very vivid and portrays not being able to receive the love of someone we love. Beautifully written, very expressive. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
The title, imagery, style and writing are par excellence. Expression of emotion is so deep. Brilliant work, Dipankar.