Monday, November 7, 2016

The Wings Of My Mind Comments

Rating: 5.0

I will never get the opportunity
To have your proximity.
So my mind wrapped in agony and pain
Tries to find happiness and peace in vain.
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Dipankar Sadhukhan
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Richard Wlodarski 31 January 2017

The title, imagery, style and writing are par excellence. Expression of emotion is so deep. Brilliant work, Dipankar.

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Kiran Mishra 05 December 2016

An excellent poem of lost love.10

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Manira Khan 22 November 2016

Beautiful metaphor. An excellent write.....10

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Valsa George 17 November 2016

A poem expressing your dejection and sorrow over lost love....! Powerful and passionate!

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 13 November 2016

Thank you so much dear poetess Ging Taping for your kind words on my poem.

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Ging Taping 13 November 2016

You are drown in the shadow of love. It is hard to accept sometimes but you can only move on when you forgive and forget..It's not the end of the world try to look at the brighter side of life. Be happy i know its not that easy but in time you when you look back you will just smile...

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Baharak Barzin 12 November 2016

A true sense of love

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 13 November 2016

Thank you very much dear poetess for your kind comments.

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Seema Devi 11 November 2016

An excellent write with few good images.10

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 13 November 2016

Thank you so much for your kindness dear poetess.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 November 2016

The bird of my mind Will no longer fly even for a single time As it has lost the strength to soar In the sky of your amour.... Beautiful metaphor you have painted nicely dear Dipankar, many thanks, keep writing....10

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 09 November 2016

Thank you very much dear poet for your kind comments.

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 07 November 2016

Thank you so much dear poetess for your kind comments.

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Roseann Shawiak 07 November 2016

An exquisite poem of longing and yearning for love, imagery of a bird not able to extend it's wings is very vivid and portrays not being able to receive the love of someone we love. Beautifully written, very expressive. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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