Saturday, February 2, 2008

The Wine And Me Comments

Rating: 2.8

I asked the moon to drink with me tonight;
he just gave me a heavy sigh,
as though he heard that plea from me
a thousand times before.
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Jessel Jane Tevar Toring
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Kesav Easwaran 17 July 2009

Quite natural you ask the moon to drink with you for you haven't seen 'your sun' for days...but the moon too is reluctant... imagination here is sweet and sober and sofly romantic...you are drinking out bringing out your grief your pains in a sweet way in this write Jane...good work...thanks...10

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Estrella Baldemosa 17 August 2008

denial, denial...don't we all do that at one point of our lives. many can relate...ah! the wine, overflowing like the tears of defeat.

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Stone Granite 21 May 2008

Your articulation of something many of us can relate to is excellent. Wine is a wonderful choice, too. Wine is the drink of romance. Of course, I would ply myself with beer, how pitiful does that sound? Nicely done Jane.

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Geovanni Leaño 03 April 2008

Great write! wish i read this long before! ^_^ i too remember this feeling... thanks ate Jane!

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Rani Turton 21 March 2008

Wine brings oblivion but very very temporary, isn't it Jane. You'll carry on from strength to strength even without that glass of wine. Courage and thanks fo rth epoem which is a very fine one.

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