Tuesday, April 10, 2012

The Windows Are Down Comments

Rating: 4.8

I surrender my thoughts
To the sounds of the engine
The air I'm moving through
And friction; tires gripping turns
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P.F. Fasulo
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Romeo Della Valle 18 April 2012

WELCOME! to the Poetry World! What a elegant and impressive way to entry in this World and you clearly shows in this amazing and well crafted write that you really have the potential to make it to the top as long as you keep giving us more food for thought like this wonderful write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing this, your first poem but not the last, I am sure of that! It has been a pleasure and an honor to read it! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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