The Window Comments

A poem with a great meaning!

A hopeful poem which tell us to open the window of our souls for a new better world.I loved it!

A great poem! Thanks for sharing.

wow! ...sensible last lines....that amplifies the concept of the whole verse....beautiful thought and compilation.

Excellent poem. Indeed, let's open every window we can and enjoy the light that pours into our souls.

what a beautiful poem....Stunning........10

a window that open to all sort of possibilities as our life do... love it.. ^-^

I opened your poem and felt as if all the beautiful images came to me through the window. It is a very fresh and optimistic poem. Best regards, onelia

Whew, This is a reading feast of discriptive word in immages.Enjoyed this quality piece from begining to end, Glad I stopped by,

This is a quite imaginative and wondrous free verse poem, Joseph, filled with superb imagery and telling of the beauty that can be found simply by opening a window and looking around. A lot of folks are confined to the narrow lanes or rooms of their life, often too busy to pause and see the beauty of the world around them. This unique poem asks the reader to do just that, and wonderfully well, too. Carl.

It feels Sooooo Great to Read Such poem Windows....Forgoten...until we are locked within 4 walls and a Locked Door That's when we Run to it... Windows..Allow the Light of the Sun and moon To come in...and we notice them only when we are in total Darkness GREAT POEM I LOVED IT

Walls protect and narrow. Windows let fresh air in. Open your eyes and your heart, a brave new world is waiting outside. Thanks for the poem.

A great poem....thanks for sharing.

this poem...more than a window that lets breeze in to mind...more than a painting that lures the mind...10

A great poem Joseph with a brilliant climax. Best wishes, Andrew

wow, such a great poem- a 10 from me :) thanks for the message

Outside a window there are nature and people. An old culture from the native land feeds a peaceful inspiration.

The hope and beauty in this poem are astounding. Your words have a comfort to them and a 'light' or fresh feeling to them. I enjoyed reading this piece very much.

you opened a new window for me, thanks for these words

This is absolutely beautiful. Open a window to the world, I agree, the possibilities are endless I rate this a10...Marianna Jo Arolin