Sunday, March 14, 2010

The Window Comments

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Where once the sun had shown through
there is darkness
layered with years of dust
with none to care, that is how it stays,
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The Joker
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Crimson Haze 17 March 2010

Awww I like it, it is very cutie. lol be happy I like never comment poems lol. Its so cutie, so who did that for you? ?

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Brenda Arroyo 16 March 2010

I love the depth of it. And the contrast was amazing. The last line brought a smile to my face... Because you understood the ways of love. I like it.

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