The Wind Whispers Comments

A good start with a nice poem, Alfredo. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

This was unpredictable, and it make it a beautiful poem

mmhhhh.... i lo..ve this one. beautiful.

DEAR ALFREDO JACQUES YOUR POEMS ARE GOOD. IT WILL BE MORE SHINING IF YOU USE APT WORDS, I MEAN SELECTIVE. LOVE WILFRED JOHN

Alfredo, your imagery is excellent. I liked it for a lot of reasons. Very good writing, easy to read and a very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing it. David

A poem with potential, no doubt, Alfredo. With a bit more work, it could be something special. (I hope you don't mind me saying so) . Thanks for your kind words on my poem.

Yeah...that is something to think about and imagine if it's no different from here.... there is room and saint peter just tells us that.......

thought provoking with a dash of cynicism. fine write. -Tailor