Thursday, April 2, 2015

The Wind Unseen Comments

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The wind blows,
but it does not show.
It's an everlasting that seems to fly,
but it never is seen by the eye.
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Crystal Pierce
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Bri Edwards 15 July 2018

3rd line: something ain't right here, Chryssie. i like the poem, but it 'could use a little work'! bri :) how ya doin'? ?

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