Invisible to the eyes
yet shivers up the senses
Every swift turn
Carries pleasing fragrances.
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fighting with wind is a fascinating experience, isn't it?
the wind almost brushed me and went on its way.it does make itself felt with its whispering caress! dear vaibhav, you write so beautifully it touches my soul.great poem, and it is going down as my favourite.!
This piece is timeless like the stardust that flows through my vines it is truly beautiful
It is very nice to read such a classic poem........ thank you for your kind sharing...
your poem is an inspiration for going ahead along the way of life. thanks very much for sharing your poetry of light, Vaibhav.
Simply delightful and I love the rhyme and rhythm. The last stanza particularly stood out for me. 10 Karin Anderson
vow! really great. let the vayu bhagvan be pleased with your offering voted10 surya
Wind is indeed the essence of living. Your words beautifully flow like cool wind. Nice to read you again. Best Wishes Naseer
this is a cool! ! breezy write indeed! ! ! liked it very much! ! ! great one to get away from the rat race we are engaged in.. nice write friend...10 with love shan
I liked the ending very much. you are a true dilliwala poet...gud keep it up.read my poem called BOOKMARK and THE RAIN SONG
A p; easing poem about the wind, but don't forget it also can blow dust in your eyes
Very nice piece...the wind has its own way... own way to show its beauty..its significance very great thoughts... 10+++ lovelots, maia
Every God'c creation has its own importance for the benefit of the world, in that the wind is one playing its vital role. A nice poem on the wind.
nice one..........certainly the wind is inspiring........... good write......
A beautiful tribute to the wind and its captivating ways. Welcome back, Vaibhav.10/10 Always your friend, Sandra
o yes, the wind always has its way, whether its with fragrances or with blowing down roof tops, whether its with swaying of tree tops, or sweet hearts lol! ! ! ! -10 anjali
What a poem! It's definitely a 10!