The Wind Of Fate Comments
He manipulates the wheel of life
Masterly woven his past
Carefully paints the present
Collects tons of gold for his future.
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This is an outstanding work......enjoyed it....thank u so much...
Very powerfully penned with deep conviction. The verdict of 'Dust To Dust`is an inescapable, existential reality that bears eloquent testimony to the maxim, 'Vanity Upon Vanity'. Thanks for your immense contribution to The Poemhunter Family.
A great poem dear poetess. There is an illustrious poetic depth in this prudent work. My great pleasure in revisiting this brilliant poem!
That's why I always believe in words of John Keats...heard melodies are sweet but those unheard are sweeter... for which we all are here! !
I absolutely agree with the truthful last line but we should always remember life is short but art is long!
A wonderful interesting write of how fate always takes a hand in all well made plans? ...well penned.
greatly penned the fate~ Everything was, and is perfect As the perfection, in the imprudent treasure of present the future has been collected! but the fate maybe the exemplary destructive gate!
A powerful poem, superbly articulated and powerfully presented in verse! A poem with a lot of power in the words, can only be created by the great poetess This fantastic poem is worth ti be read time and again.5 Stars full vote, to MyPoemList. Thank you so much for sharing
When someone is at the height of power and thinks nothing can happen to him, life is one revolving fate, and it can blow against the grain at any moment, just shake it off its pedestal!
Rose Marie your superb poem is more than worthy of another reread and again more than worthy of five shining stars. Many thanks and take care. I wish you well.
Your well written poem depicts the ultimate end result of money obsession.5 Stars
There's always a payoff for those who seek a foolish and wanton ideology, principle or self enforcing vain belief. For what goes around eventually comes around. A superbly well written powerful tour de force of a poem, presenting a more than fine moral message to any reader. Five worthy and respected stars. Richly and deservedly bestowed. Thank you for writing and sharing your poem Rose Marie and I wish you well. Take care and remain poetry blessed.
The Wind of Fate would be able to blow away any iron rimmed authoritarian wheel... Nice poem, Rose. The imagery brings in a powerful message. Five stars
Judgement! ! Ways of mankind on earth; With our works. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
People make many plans and schemes. Some manipulate everything for selfish ends. But when one is standing on the pinnacle of glory, fate can veer around in an adverse way at an unexpected time and quake him out of his pedestal! A great truth beautifully presented in verse!
He who manipulates everything towards his selfish muse will certainly one day be answerable to the verdict and has to walk away empty handed in complete, dreadful silence. Many a congratulation dear RMJ for the creation of this marvellous, catching poetic beauty.5 star
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7/20/2025 12:58:29 PM # 1.0.0
the brilliance of this poem cannot be measured Bravo!