Sunday, March 4, 2018

The Wind Is Singing [tanka ] Comments

Rating: 5.0

The wind is singing
A rumbling and baleful song
A prelude to storm
The sky clouded, ominous
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Nudershada Cabanes
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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 September 2022

A wonderful Tanka. I love your countrymates except one person who skims....just a skimmer!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 March 2018

Beautiful poem on nature nicely depicted. The last two lines are more touching. Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 04 March 2018

Lovely composition..face of sky when storm is nearing

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