Sunday, December 4, 2016

The Wind Chaser Comments

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I want the earth in my hand,
I need a house in aso.
For the great sea serpents and land
They all shall come to bow,
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Marvel Marshall 07 December 2016

This is a nice poem about life; even the title of the poem illustrate the form used by the poet; imagery...wow that's a great work from saheed..i want the earth in my hand, i need a house in aso.

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R Soos 04 December 2016

I had to google to find out ajo is a large outcrop on the outskirts of Abuja. That I even bothered to look lets you know this poem interested me. I bet that in it's original language it is very powerful. In English there are struggles; but the very first phrase is alive: I want the earth in my hand, and the final phrase is fascinating: chase the wind from west to north. Would love to see someone with knowledge of English translate the rest of this poem from the original.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 December 2016

Opulent! Facing the ways of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Marvel Marshall 07 December 2016

Thanks for your comment You will also love my latest poema song for the saga If you can view it

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