Saturday, October 12, 2019

The Wind And The Sea Comments

Rating: 4.8

The wind gives power
To the calm and sleeping giant
Sea is awaken
Unleashing its great fury
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Aarzoo Mehek 25 June 2025

Ahhhh a stormy well penned thought

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Rob Lamberton 25 June 2025

I was watching a calm sea develop waves as the wind increased today!

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Chinedu Dike 09 December 2024

An exquisitely worded verse. A wonderful creation.

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Sea is the mother of wind and wind her daughter

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 August 2020

Powerful poem, impressively worded. A 10 Full score. Most beautifully rendered, dear Mrs. Juan Austin, I was in these times still in my " not knowing anything how it works" on PH. I really did not know how to find new poems by PH poets. Now when I think back is unthinkable. ToMyPoemsList

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Shaun Cronick 24 July 2020

A powerful depiction of nature at work and wonderfully expressed in another more than fine poem by a world class poetess. Thank you Rose Marie for writing and sharing your captivating poetry and its many themes and attributes to make us smile in wonder and at times make us think. But most of all to enjoy and cherish.10+ and I look forward to reading to your future poems. Take care.

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Kesav Easwaran 27 February 2020

Naughty wind. Haughty sea. Aren't they? An imaginative write 10+

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 January 2020

A wonderful poem that compels a reader to read it time and again! Wish you HNY 2020.

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Indira Renganathan 19 November 2019

Naughty wind bullying the sea...stirred sea slaps back with its angry high-risen waves...excellent imagination ..full mark

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Unnikrishnan E S 26 October 2019

Amazing technique in restricting this big poem in so few words. The fearsome imagery brought out convincingly by using the right words at the right place. Congratulations, Rose Marie.10++

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 October 2019

I can see a furious storm in this Well penned piece, dear ate Rose...10++

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Sandra Feldman 16 October 2019

A terrifying picture, Presented with poetic imagery and imaginative poetry! A perfect canvas, painted for us, masterfully!

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 October 2019

Sleeping giant and sea, again a new way of looking at sea. This little piece has a fresh new way of looking at things. Forces the reader to think the way the poet does.

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Anjandev Roy 14 October 2019

Unleashing its great fury....another significant piece.Thank u.anjandev roy.

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 October 2019

Waves of the sea! ! Muse of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 14 October 2019

Imagining sea as a sleeping giant is a great idea. When this giant is awaken it is often merciless.

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Kostas Lagos 14 October 2019

The sea as a sleeping giant... impressive

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 October 2019

A magnificent poem that depicts nature's fury! I can visualize powerful imagery...10

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Mahtab Bangalee 12 October 2019

wind with in mercy; sea with in fury!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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