Tuesday, May 19, 2020

The Wind And The Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

The wind and the rain
Seem never to end.
One brief day of sunshine,
Then, they're back again.
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Practicing Poetess
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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 November 2020

A well conveyed poem. Truly fantastic and wonderful....5 stars*****

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Practicing Poetess 24 November 2020

Thanks very much, Bernard, for your positive comment!

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Aqua Flower 20 November 2020

Hello and what a very descriptive write of the rain. Bone chilling indeed and it paints the greenest of greens on those plants. Excellent! 10!

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Practicing Poetess 20 November 2020

Thank you, Aqua Flower! How are things in your neck of the woods?

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Yiyan Han 31 October 2020

Quite a nicely penned one!

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Practicing Poetess 01 November 2020

Thank you, Yiyan Han! :)

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Ray Hansell 24 May 2020

Bone chilling cold. I've been there. Not a nice place. This is a favorite of mine.

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Practicing Poetess 01 November 2020

Sorry for the late reply, Ray. It seems that for awhile, the site wouldn't allow us to reply to comments. Thank you for yours, and for your patience!

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Aqua Flower 21 May 2020

The rain paints the plants greener than green! Great imagery here and love the poem. The wind is bone chilling. The sun will come soon enough! I miss it too!

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The entire world needs to warm up, and quickly, to inactivate this nasty coronavirus. Hurry Sun! And thanks for commenting, Aqua!

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Kim Barney 20 May 2020

I love the rain but don't care much for the wind. Where I live, rain is always welcome. I like the way you ended the poem on a positive note.

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Hmm, you must reside somewhere out near the desert (which is actually quite beautiful, scenically- tiny desert flowers and plants that aren't found any where else. We'd gladly give you some of our rain, were that possible! I always try for an upbeat ending, except for the few cases where I pen semi-dark poetry! Thanks for commenting!

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Tom Allport 20 May 2020

The elements for life whether good or bad must exist....well penned

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Tom, how lovely to hear from you! Hope you are keeping well and safe from this beastly coronavirus!

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A lovely poem that vividly portrays how the rain and wind affect mankind and other living things. Beautifully written with great imagery.

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Thanks so much, Rose Marie, for your sweet and generous comment! : -)

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