The Wind: An Extreme Instance Comments

Beautiful so true Wind is wind

Let me quote from this amazing poem-Wind, a messanger, takes the messages fairly Of innumerable flowers' fragrances, Sweetness of fruits, melodies of bird-songs, tastes of poetry, And to the peasants love of animals' disturbances.

An exquisitely beautiful poem with great philosophy.

An excellent philosophical write.... appreciated!

philocalist I see the wind in me MEANS

Pahle pyaar ki maiñ ye nishani liye phirta huñ/ Khoon e jigar meiñ jumbish o khoob ru ki ravaani liye phirta huñ| thanks pals

You made my day with this beautiful poem. My compliments.

GR8888888888.....merry xmas to all PH POETS

Beautiful poem, dear young Poet. The wind is an essential part of our lives.Your poem flows with grace into the various objects of nature. I loved the reference and comparison to the song of a Sufi singer.........10 Thank you Jagdish for visiting my page.

" As a philocalist I see the wind in me." In English, the passing of wind is farting. Perhaps, as a philokalist, you wouldn't love this beauty. One falls into a trap of ridicule unwittingly while writing in a foreign language.

Beautifully written., great flow of language. Rich images are painted. Thanks for sharing.

A fabulous extension of Elizabeth Padillo Olesen, " The Wind" . I liked your third stanza most where you perceive wind as the bandage of love and peace! A mangnificent piece of work....brilliantly penned! Top score!

Wind is a messenger, saviour and bondage of love. It is beautiful to read Jagdish.

Wind, a bondage of love and peace Amongst the diverse hearts of its creatures, And for a painter, wind is a moving picture Of far-fatch'd fields, blue skies and solitary seas. /// wow excellently penned // superb philosophical

A great philosophical write that captures the power and many wonders of the wind. Brilliantly penned.

nice and unique the wind is music for many lovely creativity Ramana ji @21

Well articulated and nicely brought forth in beautiful rhyme scheme with conviction. An insightful creation.

Soft wind wipes away the tear, Strong wind knows no fear... An exceptional write, Jagdish...10+++

An expansive appraisal of the miracle of moving air - large thoughts creatively describing a natural phenomenon.

Wind, a messanger, takes the messages fairly Of the innumerable flowers' fragrances, Sweetness of fruits, melodies of bird-songs, tastes of poetry, And to the peasants love of animals' disturbances. - - - - What lovely definitions you have added for the 'Wind'.A great poem indeed.