Saturday, March 21, 2009

The Wind Comments

Rating: 5.0

There is a wind behind everyone
It watches us,
whatever we do
It holds us,
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Deependra Kumar Jha
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Surya . 24 August 2009

a beautiful poem with a particular style that is appealing and interesting. says many useful tips too. voted10 surya

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Kesav Easwaran 27 March 2009

a wind...protective loving and comforting...'faith'ful wind indeed...unusual idea well poetised...

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anurag duggal 22 March 2009

Love the poem 10+++ Keep writing............

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Estrella Baldemosa 22 March 2009

the wind, tangible but unseen...thanks

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Seema Chowdhury 22 March 2009

There is a wind behind everyone.... a lovely poem indeed. touches the heart of the reader.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 22 March 2009

A good poem with depth and wonderful imagery. Yes! we can always relate to nature in one way or other or in all ways. Similar to my earlier poem Bells, where I tried to relate the sounds of Bells with human thoughts..etc.

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Chitra - 22 March 2009

a strong symbolic write...the wind of support, stability and hope reading these inspiring lines i find myself all set to cope

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Catrina Heart 22 March 2009

Such a symbolic composition, informative, making us aware of the winds essence. The wind is our twin more of a shadow that knows all our feelings. It gives us happiness, life and love..........lovely poem...10

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Mohammed Albalushi 21 March 2009

i fly with wind in ur poem. i like the flow of words, nice poem

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Naidz Ladia 21 March 2009

my gosh, , what a beautiful poem...i like this much especially this time...thru this wind, it inspires me..thru this wind it swifts all worries..hope tears will not come anymore..this poem is well presented...all words are lined with too much tenderness, , , gentle..these words of yours are very loving...very caring...thats why, , i give 10 to this poem...it makes me realize that life is still beautiful.. naizz

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