Sunday, February 24, 2008

The Wind Comments

Rating: 4.2

I will be the wind and you will breathe the air I bring
and you will delight as I whisper through your hair
bringing rain to wet your tender skin with tears.
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Mary Gordley 27 February 2008

Oh to feel such a wind! This is really wonderful David. Thank you.

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Ernestine Northover 25 February 2008

So beautifully expressed David, your way with words is amazing. I loved this one lots. A wonderful read. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Ann Beard 24 February 2008

Excellent simple and romantic. I love it. worth much more than 6 I give it 10

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Wow. Nice poem David. I like this ALOT. Keep up the awesome work! ~Sunshine♥

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