The Wind - Ο Άνεμος Comments

A Vacant Tent To Rent she was dreaming in her tent she could not pay the rent her last money now was spent; concerned about where to live no more money left to give who money owed would forgive? but there was a happy ending she sudden took up mending was soon much money making; she joined a famous stage company sowed ripped costumes for free she had won national lottery; Dedicated to the poet Kostas Lagos.

Lament Provoking The Wind a warning concerning day dreaming lamenting out loud provoking the wind; on a wind blown cliff top sudden wind blast unexpected can blow you off cliff top into far below waiting sea drowning; now calculate the odds of surviving; Inspired by the poem 'The Wind - Ο Άνεμος' by the poet Kostas Lagos. Dedicated to the poet Kostas Lagos.

Lament Lifted Up: Carried Away By The Wind a warning concerning day dreaming a spoken habit lamenting out loud danger not provoking the wind; a sailors superstitious moral tale without a ship or a reef to go aground on or hazard cliff to storm sail into; lifted up carried away by provoked wind blown off cliff by sudden wind blast an uncommon threat cliff walker should know; adds new layers to both swept off your feet and cliff diving now calculate the odds of surviving;

Ha ha ha better remain grounded with realities. Fantastic one Kostas.10***

a warning concerning day dreaming, lamenting out loud, and not provoking the wind; a sailors moral tale without a ship or a reef to go aground on, or cliff to storm sail into; adds no layers to both swept off your feet and cliff diving

I hope the wind will carry her back to the safety of her home. A great imaginative write with compelling imagery.

Kostas! what an interesting poem! . The wind carrying her like a leaf and then, throwing her off the cliff. Hope the graceful leaf like lady, landed safely, in spite of the forceful wind.

And she was injured In pool of blood Though her deam was fulfilled She is bitterly scarred.

How dramatic. I best not end up as she 5 stars Panagiota

This is simply brilliant......enjoyed it......thank u, dear friend...anjandev roy.