Sweeping by when the sky was ghost quiet
You could hear the crackling sails on the ship
And the burbling water against the ship
Yes, it is the wind
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Many forms of winds from gentle to the harshest described skillfully. Amazing portrayal. Thank you, Ama Alma.
Sweeping by when the sky was ghost quiet You could hear the crackling sails on the ship And the burbling water against the ship Yes, it is the wind The mighty wind.......yes the nature is mighty and powerful and destructive at times. tony
This is good Ama, but reduce the explicit demonstration and use figuratives
Raising dust off the market road Blowing dry clothes on the washing line Taking leaves to places they've never been Yes, it is the wind The mighty wind.. very expressive of the theme and a wonderful graphic. tony