Saturday, March 30, 2019

The Wind Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sweeping by when the sky was ghost quiet
You could hear the crackling sails on the ship
And the burbling water against the ship
Yes, it is the wind
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Ama Alma Okigbo
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Dr Antony Theodore 03 February 2020

Raising dust off the market road Blowing dry clothes on the washing line Taking leaves to places they've never been Yes, it is the wind The mighty wind.. very expressive of the theme and a wonderful graphic. tony

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Rajnish Manga 05 September 2019

Many forms of winds from gentle to the harshest described skillfully. Amazing portrayal. Thank you, Ama Alma.

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 May 2019

Sweeping by when the sky was ghost quiet You could hear the crackling sails on the ship And the burbling water against the ship Yes, it is the wind The mighty wind.......yes the nature is mighty and powerful and destructive at times. tony

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Michael Eziudo Nwachukwu 31 March 2019

This is good Ama, but reduce the explicit demonstration and use figuratives

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Chix S 30 March 2019

Excellent work Ama Keep it coming

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Awele Okigbo 30 March 2019

Bravo Ama. Another masterpiece!

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