Thursday, May 26, 2016

The Wind Comments

Rating: 4.2

The wind starts at the direction he likes
and goes to the direction where it wants
We don't know where it start or go
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Beryl Jacob
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Jan Harvey 06 May 2018

this is inspiring to me... so much content to your subject, pleases the senses. jan with helpful to hindsight

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Dr Antony Theodore 08 June 2017

but we can feel it When leaves, flowers, trees move We can know the wind is moving....tjhis idea is in the bible. my dear poet...... you have grasped and meditated on the way of the wind by simple reflection...... very nice my dear young poet..... go on writiing. do not stop. thank you dear poet. tony

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Chinedu Dike 07 March 2017

Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely brought forth with insight. Thanks for sharing Beryl.

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