The Wind Comments

United we stand as we star in our own show, Of our love for each other saturated with the truth, Like we are in our love boat as together we row In calm waters, like the embrace of our souls, ......haunting expression with nice theme. A brilliant poem on love, life and wind has been presented startlingly.10

I feel your touch as the wind caresses my skin Like we are in our love boat as together we row In calm waters, like the embrace of our souls, Lovely poem on love..... such beautiful sensations you are conveying...... thank you dear poetess Hazel. tony

A very sunny write full of hope and cheer! Yes, the winds are favorable...! Steer you vessel to new directions....! A beautifully romantic write! !

A very romantic poem celebrating mature love. Loved the tone and tenor of the poem along with the rich imagery which would carry any reader into his own thoughts, far away.

Showing how much you care! Nice piece of work.

In a poem like this you feel at your skin time's pains and sins.

This read is charged with love, love and more love in every line and each word leading to the next! The wind the intangible words bring it to back to tangible for us, mortals. RAB

Once again using nature to describe a human emotion. Like the wind changes direction so too can one's feelings. From the 'arrows of the past' to being 'saturated with the truth'. Truth is the single most important ingredient in any worthwhile relationship. Some lovely touches here, Hazel.