Monday, June 3, 2013

The Wind Comments

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Oh! Wind! Where from you originate?
From high mountain cliffs?
Vast sandy deserts?
Wide spread seas around?
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Somanathan Iyer
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Heather Wilkins 20 June 2013

the wind comes and goes at will. we know not how his happens just that it cools us on a summer day. lovely write

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Patricia Grantham 06 June 2013

A beautiful poem. One does not know from which direction the wind comes. We can see the trees swaying to and fro. Clothes hanging on a line waving up and down. Most above all the air that we breathe is cleansed by the ever present wind. A thoughtful write.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 05 June 2013

Roar in gales Smile in breeze Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Valsa George 04 June 2013

A description of the wind in its soft caressing form and also in its sweeping fury! ! Enjoyed! ! I invite you to read my poem- The Evening breeze! !

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Gajanan Mishra 03 June 2013

great write, kissing the flowers, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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