Monday, July 23, 2012

The Wind Comments

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I restlessly travel this world
I watch over the souls of this planet
I can be a gentle breez down your cheek
Or a fearless storm
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A good poem describing an element of nature. The parallelism gets the right effect on the reader-attention. Well done

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Charles Bernard 23 July 2012

The wind is really nature's most trusted friend

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Charles Bernard 23 July 2012

The wind is really nature's most trusted friend

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Azuki Sohumo

Azuki Sohumo

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