Friday, March 16, 2012

The Wind Comments

Rating: 4.8

The cold breath of sage and kind
has become the light breeze,
touching the heart and soul,
The warm out hale of living things
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Harindhar Reddy 20 March 2012

Wow! Just like a beginning of the novel in created a nice plot and then expressed your idea a satire on the politicians in a poignant way. kudos!

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Raj Arumugam 19 March 2012

your concern for the world and its situation shines through these lines, VS

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Spiritual Seeker 18 March 2012

Great lines..great message..and how beautifully you build up the message across! A great 10. Keep writing these critical poems sir!

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Eric Cockrell 17 March 2012

this one is very good... your closing lines pack a big punch!

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