The Wind Comments
The wind blew oh so wildly
The night my father died
It rag`ed like a tempest
And on that night I cried
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Beautiful! This has such a seemlessly soothing rhythm! I like you use of ' (forgive my ignorance, this probably has a proper term!) to break down words so they fit better. I read without tripping over my eyes!
A very nice poem with a sense of hope about it. Thank you for sharing it with us.
A really nice poem, Valerie! May the blowing of the wind bring us sweet peace!
A really nice poem, Valerie! May the blowing of the wind bring us sweet peace!
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7/24/2025 9:19:30 PM # 1.0.0
This is excellent and almost like a lullabye. So tranquill. Thank you for sharing.