Wednesday, August 2, 2006

The Wind Comments

Rating: 4.5

It roared,
it shrieked,
it ebbed,
it peaked,
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Arti Chopra
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Preeti - is here! 13 August 2006

I like your style of writing. Its too the point, no extra baggage! also the rhyme was perfect, and loved the ending! Preets

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Catastrophe King 02 August 2006

That was well written..... Arti, good work. I like the rhythm that u maintain.....9/10

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