Tuesday, March 4, 2008

The Win Comments

Rating: 5.0

So many cuts,
So many screams.
But oh thank God,
It was only a dream.
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Amy Stuart
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Harlan Simantel 04 March 2008

Startling! Sure got my attention...sweel should be swell? in next to last verse? I have bipolar (manic-depressive) myself, fairly mild. I've read that a high proportion of creative people suffer from bipolar - extreme highs and lows. Ironically, that's where some of our creativity comes from - born out of extremities and reflected in our art. A high price to pay, but also some compensation. I hope you don't follow thru on your poem's theme. You have a lot to give and create: just one life affected makes a big difference - and you are that difference. Thanks for 'opening your wounds' to the world.

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