Saturday, September 12, 2009

The Willow Trees Legacy Comments

Rating: 3.5

In a glen in a forrest
A forrest of old
That in it's time of youth
Whispers of magic were uttered
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jen capaldi
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i like this poem.. it shows and tells of a God-appointed bond.

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Eyan Desir 10 October 2009

That was a sweet poem good write

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Spiritwind Wood 04 October 2009

nicely written, and spoken.expressed so beautifully.i like reading your work.keep it up jen-you're my true poet at heart

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moribund love 28 September 2009

true love is divine. beautiful expression.10+++

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Roxy Gonro 19 September 2009

I love it. i think it tells a great love story and the way you wrote it was great.

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Tamara - Hanaring 17 September 2009

a romantic poem and story presented with a beautiful and touching way...enjoyed the images which penned so well..

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Mubeen Sadhika 17 September 2009

Amazing expression. Beautifully written. Liked a lot.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 16 September 2009

Strong and awesome. Keep writing!

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Obinna Eruchie 14 September 2009

This is truly The Willow Trees Legacy, wonderful to read.

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sky dreams 14 September 2009

i love the tristan and isolde story.. and youve captured its essence wonderfully

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Patrick A. Martin 13 September 2009

A great take on an ageless love story well done.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 13 September 2009

Two weeping willows stand alone Two trees that have grown as one Thier branches intertwined Embraced in a lovers hold Keeping eternal watch Over the graves of two young lovers, , , , , , , , , , , , , legacy of love awes curved in stone youth of love yet redounds to green...........wonderful story of a love carved over the emblem of green yet reminding the very turning truth of love as old as stone, still riffles in silhouettes of alienation falling apart, yet passionately poignant, wrought ingenious by imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Eyan Desir 13 September 2009

Good write 10s...........

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Floyd Zimmerman 12 September 2009

Another poem of yours that i lke, i like the way the two lovers and the two trees are compared, i would like to know who Tristan and isolde are

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