Friday, March 8, 2019

The Will Fully Exchanged Gowns Comments

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Why are you starring at my changing shadows?
I am what I was, unchanged in the meadows,
Don't look at me through the glass windows
I'm walking here on the green and flowery rows.
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Konab Ghumman 12 March 2019

beautifully penned it with outstanding feelings. love these lines........ I'm sure, a love story we can write, While going back forget your white gown, As if accidentally you wore mines, though it's brown.

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Khalid Saifullah 08 March 2019

Such a beautiful metaphor, liked it.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 March 2019

Come to me and let the skins merge in each other.....this magnificent line is the kernel of this wonderful poem dear sir....10

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