Wednesday, January 28, 2009

The Wild, Wild Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Cold wind slapping tree branches,
The moon, frenzied, hidden, wonders when
The tempest and the temper will end.
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I Am Charlie 18 March 2011

I wonder about the people this poem paints. I like how it suggests more about them by 'casual' description.

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Fay Slimm 01 March 2009

This piece opens up the feel of the wildness of some rainstorms just perfectly Rani - - I really enjoyed reading it......10 from Fay....

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Catrina Heart 06 February 2009

lovely poem about nature and rain....10+++

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Tom Balch 01 February 2009

Rani, a great piece, felt like I was in the wild rain.10+ Tom

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Hazem Al Jaber 31 January 2009

amazing dear sweet poet to discribe your feelings which you hold inside in this sweet lovely loving way.. so beautiful.. hazem al..

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