Fly me across the wild hills in autumn,
With soft amber shades, brown, russet and brick,
Peach, copper and bronze all blending together,
A carpet of sadness, in this sight so tragic.
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Fly me to, a poem by you and I am bound to find something beautiful contained Thankyou Ernestine Love duncan X
This poem is like a journey well taken through the year with all the imagery that lights up one's life. This is indeed a master-piece and seconds to none on the theme. The words are like engraved on the well sculpted verses, they shine with the repetitions! It deserves the complete vote and I am going to also put this in my favorites.
changing seasons captured in colour...wonderful...great read...love...nalini
The sensations....the imagery....wonderful, Ernestine, and I agree with everything your other readers have said. This is going into my favourites box because I love colour and you have got it perfectly right. Love, Fran xxx
A very well crafted poem Ernestine.Love the description of seasonal colours.Can see them if you close your eyes and a friend reads it to you.Marvellous stuff. Some poetry should be read out loud and this is one of them. Sid John xxx
Wonderfully evocative Ernestine. I saw each stanza in full technicolour! . I thought the repetitive phrasing on the first lines worked really well. Justine :)
Ernestine>>>Feel like I was just taken through a Year Of Wonder on a Time -Site! Absolutely brilliant in image, structure &overall craftsmanship...i love it, YOUNG LADY! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''fjr
Ernestine what a charmer such qualty in your writing and the colours in the words such a beautiful poem cheers Sylvie