Wednesday, June 7, 2023

The Wild Fire And The Mother Comments

Rating: 5.0

The giant dragon advanced hissing aloud
Licking with its tongues of hot red flames
In countless avaricious wide open mouths
And devouring everything in its unjust course.
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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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Indira Renganathan 22 June 2023

A very touching dolorous poem. Also a beautiful write that stands out as an example as to how to write a sorrow poem. Remarkably great

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With abundance of gratitude I humbly acknowledge your lofty commends, dear neighbour poetess

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2) If I remember right, the incident occurs, when Arjuna burns the Forest Khandava for building the capital for their new kingdom, which was named Khandavaprastham.

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You are right. But the bird family finally become safe

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A fantastic story, most beautifully penned. A great ode to motherhood and love. There is a similar story in Mahabharata.Hope the poet has read it.

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Yes, dear poet. I had only a vague idea of the story.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 June 2023

A deeply poignant yet beautiful poem. A vivid and brilliant depiction of a great love of a mother, love that is beyond comparable. To my favorites.

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I have come across a great story, somewhat like this, in the Upanishads. It really touched my heart. Mother's love is inexhaustible though apologies are there. I bow my head before the selfless love of mothers which human memory can carry everywhere for energy and encouragement.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 June 2023

A very touching scene of a union of a mother and children showing their great love among each other in time of adversity. This is beautifully expressed and presented in the penultimate stanza of the poem.

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I have tried my level best to pour in the sentiments

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 June 2023

A very gripping story. The stunning images and powerful poetic expressions transport a reader to the scene of a dreadful wild fire and see and feel the hot red flames.

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Thanks a lot dear poetess.

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M. Asim Nehal 07 June 2023

Awesome poem, A mother's affection is unparalleled, as they consistently prioritize their children's needs selflessly. I have yet to witness a mother who doesn't attempt to protect or champion their offspring.5****

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Thank you very much dear poet. A mother's love is selfless and incredibly sacrificial. We have, sometimes, to learn from it from the nature which is a mother of all

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