TO BEE:
'Tis dawn as the warmth of the sun embraces every being on earth;
As high up on the branches of the butter fruit tree -
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you kind of remind me of kamala das's poems, the one about summer...you just reminded me of my school days friend... take care
This is an amazing piece of work. The complete cycle of life Well written poem. Thanks for sharing with me
wow... awesome work.... so beautiful.. truly a lovely write... a 10+++
a dynamic write on the ever changing life cycle....resonating images
OMG! ! ! what a tryst with life a complete circle awesome and rich in text ill give you a tenner anjali
This is an amazing piece of work that has got all the elements of life, the dance, the flight, the love..is one's life ever complete without these emotions? It's an adept poet's proficent craft. You have created a brilliant world of bees with an entourage of elegant nature and it's wild beauty...we continue to see the best of your works...each time a surprise package..completely different in dimension and expression from your previous works...
This lovely lyrical poem on 'The Wild Bees' comes with beautiful imagery. Imaginative.