Monday, July 18, 2016

The Widow Bird Comments

Rating: 5.0

I felt your pain in my beating heart,
So I brought for you a new spouse,
Quarrelsome bird! Forget the past,
Welcome him in the lonely house.
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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 January 2018

Don't know if you wait for the moment, When instincts make her again a Miss.....magnificent expression! Loved reading your poem...10

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M Asim Nehal 23 July 2016

The sweet notes of the bird is a music to the year and in your about poem you have given a great description of the two birds fighting and staying together, a wonderful poem to read, thanks Janab

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Khalida Bano Ali 20 July 2016

A beautiful observation of birds.............................................

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