The wicked witch of the east
Belched after devouring the feast
Her face painted in white rouge
She searched for some crimson blood
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A good poem indeed from a beginner! Feelings in their true colour have been painted.Keep writing.If time permits, read my A GLOSSARY OF POETIC TERMS so as to equip yourself with more poetic devices.
A free flight of creativity on winged imagination. Really an interesting story written with clarity of thought and mind. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched